Nah, it wasn't your description, it was the one I read on Wikipedia.
Plus, I read it sort of late at night, and I wasn't functioning correctly
Plus, it was like a high school level description, and I'm only in Middle School
But your English was fine, really good actually considering that it probably wasn't your original language
Right? I mean if I tried to write in Japanese or Hawaiian right now, my writing would be (a LOT
) worse! (No kidding)