ill have to find an online spell checker if the automatic one isn't doing a good enough job : /
and also i just sat down and wrote that for like 45 mins so just a first draft, everything can change and the stuff in the episode guide will change to reflect it
i tried to section it off into segments so that they could be like books you find throughout the lvls, kinda collectible easter eggs to tell u the story instead of an info dumb at the beginning of a game. So since you didn't find them all at once i repeated things so they could each be read independently when i could
I probably wont use psychic powers, its just weird thinking about a t-rex using technology with its stubby arms, may have it so that they actually use giant robot arms and they purposefully modified their arms to be smaller so they could fit into a small socket to control the robot appendages.
i wasn't really trying to make the dinosaurs moral, when i was writing it i was thinking they were pretty ruthless. if u got x-com recently then they are more like the aliens than the humans
as for the celestial girl, i can have it so even though they r immortal they still have kids every few hundred years, and she was just born after the dinosaur uprising so doesn't have the same fear of mortals. ill change up the episodes so they aren't so much angel and demon, she liked the guy because of his personality traits, so she saved the woman for hers.
all of the immortals are actually going to be 3d models so you can visually tell them apart, otherwise they are just mimicking old legends. i was thinking instead of an angel she look like a young harpy, some of the background angels and demons may also look similarly
i'm kind of attached to the dinosaurs creating the original humans, but the current day humans wont have any recollection. as far as they know the dinosaurs were an unintelligent species that got wiped out by a meteor just like what we think today, may go in and state specifically that some of the Armageddon magic was going to wipe all the technology out so no trace was left. Adam and eve were actually still in their vats when the meteor hit, was going to have it so their magic protected them and they just woke up the next day alone in a garden of eden like place. the fact that they have latent ability explains why you never meet dogs or cats in the game that use magic, so going to keep that they were created to wield it.
ill have to flush it out a bit more and think more on ur suggestions, thanks again for your help!