I see were you are going. I like your pencil work. My advise is to use unlined paper cause if you feel the drawing developing into a art piece for frameing then you look much more professional on true sketch paper.
Keep up ht egood work and if you need help with an ides give me a visit
thanks for the comments and advice, also i have a question? when yuor drawing a character how do u get it to look consintant like how do u get it to look the same if you drew it once already.
If it is your own drawing you r trying to do a copy of, just trace it with tracing paper and color it in .......by the time you r coloring or shading it the second time, it may improve seeing you r more advanced.