I love your work as an artist.
I don't mean to sound like a critic... I just read a lot of stories.
Sometimes I'll write stuff too, but as an avid lover of good writing, I hate cliff hangers.
I love the way you used pictures for dialogue and the art was good, but that one thing irks me.
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Eh, I don't mind critique if it's supposed to help

But I really feel like it's better to leave her story in the air, my current TG comic will show more of the process of adaptation since the protagonist genitalia is the first thing to transform, and he also has to attend school while the rest of his body changes over the year
I've read some. I like where you're going with this one too so far.
Wow...
That sounded a lot better in my head
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