Think you could do another? If you don't want to then I understand, but after what you gave me I want to learn more. so if it doesn't bother you, could you please critique this one:
Find the critique thread I have going and post it there. The thumbnail isn't working here. Eventually I will get to it. If you want to learn stuff before then however try reading these two articles I wrote on my artblog. [link] and [link]