You're welcome. They are deserved. Fix your literary expression a bit, though, some sentences sound funny. Otherwise, I hope you will write more of that particular story and finish it. I would love to see how it all ends.
I'm working on chapter 3 right now, actually. And I'm sorry about any sentences that sound a bit wonky (English isn't my home language and my only editors are me, myself and I ), but I'm trying my best.
You will improve, I'm sure. I could proofread for you if you wish me to, but I'm having exams for the next five weeks and I won't be available. That's the reason I'm late with this reply.