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thnx fer teh fave YUNIE!! ^__^ i misssss yew!! :hug:

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Ash .... = ^_^ = ... hmmm...impossible iz nuthin...cuz nuthinz impossible....itz the possibilitiez tht make all the possiblez impossible...wich iz impossible itself... O_o?...OR DUZ IT!?!?! @_@???

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Heya!! :p adding you to my devwatch too :p

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Q: "You and the Enterprise weren't thrown back in time accidentally, were you?"
Spock: "No..."
Q: "Ha! So it has to be that lob-sided dougnut thing."
Spock: "Ah, the Guardian of Forever. Do you know it?"
Q: "Been there, done that, got the T-Shirt."
Hai thankies! :blahblah:
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Ohh I'm looking forward to Christmas!! :santa:
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Seeya!!
Kay I've uploaded....stuff....
Just so there's more to see...more will come..
I'm going to bed now... lol
:D
hey thx darkmoonlight... actually I didnt' expect other people to answer here...guess I was wrong...
how nice to be wrong sometimes... :p lol
XD
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Hey, thanks for the watch :). You've got some nice art. I can't wait to see more ^_^.

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I could say that I like it, but I always say that.
I could say it is great, but that would be boring.
I could say it's your best work ever, but who am I to judge for that?
Therefor I say nothing, but just gape and drool at the picture.
Thanx! I really need to get myself a scanner... :(
Oh well..do you like my story?
Yeah. I have to read more of it, but so far it looks good. Just one tip. You write dialogues on the same line, you can better use enters. like instead of:

"Hi I'm Acrocat." I say. "Hi Acrocat, I'm Bar2aYunie." You reply.
You can better do it this way:

"Hi I'm Acrocat." I say.
"Hi Acrocat, I'm Bar2aYunie." You reply.

I did it myself as well (If you look at my first parts of Endless Rain you'll notice that,) but it's kinda annoying to read it like that ^^;. As a writer you perfectly know and understand what's happening. It's your job as a writer to make it clear to the readers.

Indeed scanner can be very handy yes :D.

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I could say that I like it, but I always say that.
I could say it is great, but that would be boring.
I could say it's your best work ever, but who am I to judge for that?
Therefor I say nothing, but just gape and drool at the picture.
Thx, I thought about that and I tried some about it in the second part...
My next part.. I'll try it completely on how you did it.
So after EVERY spoken part of one person, I need to go to the second line?
hmm...you get a way longer story... lol :D
;-)

Thx for the tip!

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