Comment on ~zodiacwizard

Hi hi!

Very sorry that I have not commented untill now! I just do not feel that I am a very good judge of poetry, so I do not really feel comfortable leaving comments/critiques ( did I spell that right?)

All Great work though. I have to go back and read them a second/third time or more and they make me stop and think for a second, which is what poetry is all about, ehh?


PS: I like the Studio Antiquity banner thingy, you should post a bigger version so I can see the smaller text better ( can't read it at all!)
*le'sigh* ... to be a part of a real artist's studio... I need to get the qualifications for joining

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*poke* updates plz!

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Hi! ...If you don't put up some more recent things I'll kick you in the head. Yes, in the head. Whichever is closest... to my foot. ...?... The end?

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Of all that is written I love only what a man has written with his blood. Write with blood, and you will experience that blood is spirit...
Friedrich Nietzsche, Thus Spoke Zarathustra

Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
I know. That's why it's going to work.



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Thanks a bunch for the comment. Appreciated.

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At paranoia's poison door
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-King Crimson "Twenty-First Century Schizoid Man"

thank you for the comment and +fav

i really appreciate it



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Hey! Thanks a lot for the comment and +fav!!



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thanks for the comment..i like your work btw

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Thanks much for the comment and devwatch

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hi !!!

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