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Interesting poetry. I had never delved into horror poetry before and find it just such a different genre. Somehow I find it fascinates me.
Good stuff.
yay! you have a fan! actually now that makes 2
yeah! thats awesome!
Thank you! this is my favourate genre to dabble in, but i do read other genre's lol :)
thankyou for your kind comments...:orange:

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your welcome! :)

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This is a Triolet - well actually it is two triolets.



Fantastic Freedom - Triolet


Can you see the laughter here in my smile
And feel passionate worlds within these eyes?
Life was joy, sometimes an intriguing trial,
can you see the laughter here in my smile?

Time's lines have been on my face for awhile
But youth was once mine to fold into sighs.
Can you see the laughter here in my smile
And feel passionate worlds within these eyes?

Beautiful dreams I have sipped like fine wine,
Love in my heart has measured my wisdom,
God gave me grace from His presence: divine,
Beautiful dreams I have sipped like fine wine.

I skip, dance, then sing on wonder's incline,
fly through the veins of fantastic freedom,
Beautiful dreams I have sipped like fine wine,
Love in my heart has measured my wisdom.



Line 1 and 2 make an observation
1. A 2. B
Line 3 rhymes with line A
Line 4 is line 1 repeated
The first four lines look like this:

1. A
2. B
3. a
4. A

In the second stanza line 5 and 6 involve a twist, change of view, or add another idea.

Line 5 rhymes with line A
Line 6 rhymes with line B
Line 7 repeats line A
Line 8 repeats line B

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Smile, frown,
see yourself:
dwelling
on memories
collected.

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ahhhh, i see lol...i like it ^_^ thanks!!

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Lotus:

I don't know if you will like George Winston-he;s new age piano. If you do give him a listen, try to find something from his "Autumn" album.
He's very soothing...a far cry from Metallica...
I do like a few songs by Guns N' Roses and think their guitar player (Slash) is unique.


Cheryl
i'll try and look for him! Slash rules lol, thank you for posting! ^_^

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