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thanx fur the add :)

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Heya! It's good to finally have you on here! :hug: I'm still wanting you to visit sometime! :glomp:

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thanks for the fave :)

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thanx for the fave!!!

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Well, a couple of your poems are fairly decent. I think your main problem area is repetition. You reuse words and concepts a lot, to the point where it looks the same. Sorry. :/

But Heaven is On Fire? That's pretty good. =D

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Thanks, I hope you liked it. Yeah, sorry about that but it means somethin different read than when wrote. It means something different when I first write it compaired to when I or someone lese reads it. Do you know what I mean?

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"written" ;)
That's the passion that should be behind a more visual art. Writing poetry is writing...You do not write what you know in poetry. When you write poetry, know nothing. You strictly write and bring forth manifestations of feeling. Instead of saying "My heart aches with the pain you've given me", try something less...physical, you see?

Something like,
"My heart is consumed by the tapeworms you've coughed into my lungs"

something less...REAL.

You know?

obviously there are no real rules to poetry. But from one poet to another...yeah.

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Why thank you for the piece of advice, but I guess I never really thought about writting so dramatically.

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