Use larger words. ^^ Try that, it makes it interesting.
Close your eyes and get a mental picture. Then try to explain that picture to the reader.
Read it out loud to yourself. See how it sounds.
You can use commas! ^^ A comma is probally my favorite punctuation mark. <3
I'm not really sure what POV (point of view) this is in. An OC? Present or past tense?
hey there SasukeUchiha53 your my best friend in the whole world other then your sister well congrates on your new Deviant art account hope you have fun on it
Love you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooomuch
I'm glad you love me and I love you too. Thank you for giving me an awsome avitar. I can always count on you, Becca. I hope you feel the same way for me too. Love you 2.
I do use commas, and my favorite pun. mark is a ! mark. I thank you for responding to my message. I dunno how to use bolder lettering, other wize I'd use it... It's in my POV and the time is ..... Neither past or present. As a matter of fact it's not even in the future.
XD Use more commas, I mean.
Make short sentences run-on sentences.
Use lots of adjetives. (can't spell, I know.)
You might want to explain a little about yourself/your character. We need to see more into your characters background, who they are. What they look like. A little bit about their personality. Their name? ^^' Things like that.
We want to know what love means to you!
Get your creative juices flowing and design a movie poster for "Paper Heart" that focuses on the theme "What Does Love Mean to Me?".
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