π¦+Silly with a Gentle demeanorThe term gentle can mean "mild in temperament or behavior; kind or tender or moderate in action, effect, or degree; not harsh or severe."
'Silly' being a kinder word than 'childish' or 'nonsensical', Tallula is a very uplifting girl-- or at least she tries to be. She believes a good perspective alongside optimism is how you have greater success (just simply beliefs though)... however in more dire situations she uses her humor as an emotional shield and has a hard time being serious in serious situations. She's careful though! She doesn't force her humor or opinions onto people. Never being too hard or overbearing to anyone. Usually...!
π¦-Abrupt/Curt way of thinking
So she's sort of impulsive in her thoughts about others, mildly. Nothing ill-intending she'll assure you but what can she say, she sees it how it is. Sometimes it just slips out. She'll rationalize it by calling it honesty but-- don't worry! She knows when she crosses the line. Most of the time. (Over the years she's gotten good at holding her tongue.)
π¦+/-Caring but UncoordinatedCaring is actually ok here in the personality as it doesn't contradict any other personality mentioned, but going over your bio, there is a contradiction mentioned that contradicts with being caring.
She tries, she really does. Of course she's caring towards family and friends but Tallula likes the idea of being thoughtful, graceful, and all of that jazz all the time but... She knows how she is. She's a klutz. A ditz. zzzzz. However! She won't let that stop her! She's going to care the bubbles out of people. And fumble over them the whole way.
Tallula didn't particularly like helping out but soon discovered she had a knack for healing.She doesn't like helping out as mentioned here, and thus I don't believe it's a correct attribute to describe her as caring....
π¦+/-Determined but Self ConsciousAnother contradiction found here, is that Tallula is optimistic, however optimistic individuals are typically assured and believes positively in others and probably herself. So this does go along with being supportive and cooperative here.
She'd find a way to do just about anything if it would prove herself to you. She's extremely driven and not soft-spoken at all. Which is why the lack of self confidence she has surprises even her sometimes. She hides behind her crude jokes and blunt remarks but she's wholeheartedly afraid of being looked down on or being a burden.
π¦+/-Skeptical but Cooperative
Honestly she doesn't have much confidence in anyone's abilities. You can say you're the strongest or the fastest or the most skilled but she'll most likely just humor you and tag along regardless if you are or not. She automatically assumes you don't know what you're doing until proven otherwise. But wait! She's supposed to be supportive and optimistic and give you confidence! Or that's how she thinks she should be. So, sure, she'll go along with your bravely interesting ideas rather than have conflict but don't hope for too much....
Sick of how her brothers undermined and ignored her. Sick of not being able to crack jokes or slouch and, oh, so very sick of being expected to be perfect like her mother and father. So one day she told them (More like she told them off). Quite unexpectedly they were fine with all she said and her not wanting to be a Knight or Guardian (still not very happy aboutIf she was really determined and wanted to prove her self worth, I don't think she would've given up like that in being a Knight/Guardian.
Maybe if they were funny or entertaining but from the few she has met they didn't impress her much.This right here is a run-on, I would just suggest putting a comma before the word, "but" to make things easy
She can't really be bothered with the thought of contracts or the thought of the realm they come from.I actually don't understand this statement or what you were trying to say with this? Where you trying to explain she just didn't care about learning about contracts? Or are you saying she didn't want to go into a contract? Because contracts really don't come from any realm. So please clarify this statement.
Other Khadroman are fine but all the ones she's known in her life or met have been too nice, too catty, or too smart for their own good.Another run-on here, I would suggest another comma before "but". But along with that, I don't quite understand which "Other Khadroman" is referred to in this statement. Does this mean Khadroman outside her family? Or just in general Khadroman other than herself. Please clarify.
Pandemonians, however, interest her to no end.She's only met one in her whole life and he was the best fighter she had ever seen. Cruel confident air was almost visible around him while he fought. Precise strikes and blows were made with no hesitation. She still has dreams of the duel she got to witness. If only he had let her dress his wounds. (shudder)
I don't think this actually fits here.. not because it's in the wrong section, but it doesn't flow or go along with your previous paragraphs, as there isn't a transition or link to why this should be mentioned in a way. So I would just actually take this out, so there's no confusion unless you can somehow incorporate this better. Probably mentioning in a topic sentence she finds it difficult to become a great support maiden to fighters because her lack in coordinated skills?
"You're pretty bad at this aren't you?" she's asked her brothers or random patients while treating them.
"Just be better, yeah?" She'd tell them almost laughingly. She's seen real battle. She can tell when you don't know what you're doing. And over the years she's met quite a lot of warriors and mages that are all talk and fancy armor.
"As if you could do better!" they'd defend themselves to her. Well. Yes of course she couldn't do better. She was quite aware of that, though. The way she'd so casually accept it made others frustrated and annoyed with her often. What? She thinks to herself. She was just being honest. (It's not really a surprise she has little to no friends.)
Tallulah is a mermaid Khadroman; more specifically a jellyfish mermaid which is an oddity in itself, considering she's the only one she's aware of. (Her family has normal tails) she thinks her tail is prettier.I'm just wondering is it just odd for her to be a jellyfish mermaid in all of Khadroma or just in her family? Since you mentioned her family has normal tails, and thus it sounds likes they're not jellyfish mers either....or did you just mean tentacles..?
She has a land form that includes a human lower body and legs. (She uses them about the same amount she uses her tail, legs don't bother her at all.) Her hair also dries and transforms into long blue locks.Please describe further on what you mean by this statement. I don't quite understand what it means the same amount she uses her tail.. the same amount of what? Is this amount the condition she has to have to transform into her human form?
Abyssal Rejuvenation (Water) :::: Tallula slams down her staff, causing a splash of energy around her to create powerful bubbles. The bubbles surround her and another 3 allies of her choice, buffing the ally's defense and debuffing Tallula's defense while slowly regenerating their health by 10% each minute for 10 minutes max if Tallula is uninterrupted. Tallula cannot use this spell if her defense has already been debuffed, or if the allies health is 80% or more. After the spell is used she can't use it for 15minutes. (A spell her grandmother once used that she practiced and later pimped out.)Basically I will break down what this ACE does, please correct me if I'm wrong:
Virtus (MANA) [1] :::: Grant the subject 1 temporary hit point.Lastly in this section, you can only use a max of 3 elements for regular spells. ACE spells have no elemental limit. So I would suggest probably replacing 1 of the spells you have here with another.
Aqua Flagelli (WATER) [1] ::::: User creates a string of water to use as a whip to damage the enemy. Dissipates after the strike.
Aqua Mico (WATER) [1] :::: Creates various droplets to come together and reflect light brightly, blinding the enemy temporarily.
Sanitatem Pollinis (GRASS) [1] :::: Heal a target with the help of nature **One target only
Amica Vocationem (WATER) [1] :::: User is able to call upon the water particles present in the plants of the nearby area and turn them into projectiles, sending them to the target. *Damage output depends on total Magic.
Infrigidando Defensio (ICE) [1] :::: More Defense for 30mins.
Tallula likes to stay the whale away from enemies, as she is a fagrile majestic lady fish and does not want to be made into sushi!Typo found here: fagrile =>>fragile.... That would like kind of bad if we left it... >.<"