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And more chances of dolphins than up here! No context, by the way, just dolphins in general.
That's what I think anyway.
Movement added to what you have could have its appeal, fo sho. But I'm inclined to suggest that your slightly realist approaches merit a different kind of pacing on the pages. The "feel" - though not aesthetically - reminds me of the older, polygonal Max Payne game intros. But movement to the compositions could bring some pacing to contrast the existing approaches you use, which'd undoubtedly make for even more dynamic storytelling.
Love the style though. I hope you'll keep experimenting with ways to present the b/w/r palette 'cause you're ace at it.
PS. I wonder whether monsters to you are dolphins to me.
That's what I think anyway.
Movement added to what you have could have its appeal, fo sho. But I'm inclined to suggest that your slightly realist approaches merit a different kind of pacing on the pages. The "feel" - though not aesthetically - reminds me of the older, polygonal Max Payne game intros. But movement to the compositions could bring some pacing to contrast the existing approaches you use, which'd undoubtedly make for even more dynamic storytelling.
Love the style though. I hope you'll keep experimenting with ways to present the b/w/r palette 'cause you're ace at it.
PS. I wonder whether monsters to you are dolphins to me.
Incidentally, the red additions in Jaguar will only last through to the end of the next chapter, then a different colour highlight gets used, as different bits need to be bound together...