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what do u mean??

i was talking bout some 1 else.

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"Shadow of annoyance -
Ne'er come hither!
...And when He falleth, He falleth like Lucifer,
Ne'er to ascend again..."
--->theatre of tragety-and when he falleth
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:skullbones: :blackrose:

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Thanks for the honesty. That is what I like to see.
Welcome.
Thanks for the watch :evileyes:

cheers!
:flagcanada:
Shotgun Messiah was much better before Tim took over vocals.

Welcome to dA.
I meant to devolve in that piece, by the way. It mirrors my own mental state.
Thanks. The . was a mistake Ihadn't noticed, but will remove asap. Your critique did me well. I will rework what you have pointed out. As for the cliche sounding bits though...I was sort of aiming for that.

Perhaps I should use the description box for what it's proper use, rather than continue my vagueness there.


However, thankyou.
i'm going to rewrite that entire stanza. the more i read it, the more i hated it.

thnx again!
Welcome to DA. I'll certainly be watching you.
Ay - late '80s, lasting into the early '90s. They started out as a rather fresh sound on the hair band scene - then eventually evolved into cheesy radio shit, then into industrial wannabes. It was a torrid affair.

Sometimes I wish I could forget.
Welcome to our virtual Writer's Club and thanks for the watch, now I can see again what time it is ...

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