Thanks! I had a quick glance at your writing (while rushing through galleries to thank everyone who kindly took the time to read my story) and I noticed that your leads follow Kurt Vonnegutt Jr.'s advice. He's a writing hero of mine, because of the way he mixed humour, quirkiness and social comment.

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“Make [your] characters want something right away—even if it’s only a glass of water."-- Kurt Vonnegut Jr.