"A Single Rose"

A single rose, alone in the dark--
Untouched, but not forgotten--
A solitary figure in the dark.
Beautiful bold red blossom.
A feud heard in the distant background,
A long stem with sharp thorns,
One prick, blood is spilt--
A passion and forbidden love,
Secrets hidden, embedded in this rose;
Hate, Jealousy, Death---
As an icy wind passes,
Hot hurtful rays of the burning sun,
Makes its way.
Then there was coldness---
A burning desire,
A final farewell.
There sits the dying rose,
Withered and torn.
A vial, a dagger,
Petals now fallen,
Swept away by the wind.
Remembrance of a classic tragedy---
Surrounded by a loud silence--
“Never was a story of more woe”
In the end, there was finally peace---

My favorite and first poem that I've posted on here so check it out.

i love it god u are so awsome..u must teach me hahahha

Hey, thanks for your comment on "Whipser in the Twilit Manor" I'm glad you liked it!

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thanks for commenting, and welcome to dA

Thanks for commenting on and faving masquerade. You can see just how much it changed if you can find the original buried deep within my gallery. Now I'll take a good look at yours.

Thank you for your comment on "The Tempest"

I just want to thank everyone for reviewing/commenting my work it's really helpful to me to know what you think. If you guys have the time check out these pieces: A Single Rose, Silent, and The Endless Sea, and please see if you can comment on them, they're my favorite pieces that I've posted so far and it would mean a lot if you could look them over since sadly enough nobody seems to notice them. Thanks.

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~"You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough...~
~MidnightMoonlight16~

Thank you so much for the comment. That is really nice of you. If you don't mind I will be adding you to my watch list. Any great poet such as you is a friend of mine. Keep up the excellent work, and by the way "A Single Rose" is great! Bye!

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"If we're gonna survive, the dream must stay alive." - The Tribe

"I'm wishing on a star, to follow where you are.
And I wish on all the rainbows that I see."

Wishing on a Star - Miriam Stockley

Thanks so much for hte +fav on my "Love in a Dream" poem! I've been so busy I haven't had time to check my devMessages, so much apologies for the delay of appreciation I'm really glad you liked it, thank you

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I'll be writing in my dreams.