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once you perfect the art of looking innocent, you can get away with alomst anything

Ummm... ok SERIOUSLY, THANK YOU!!!!!!! I still think my poems stink but, thank you SO much, at least SOMEONE likes them. K, now about each poem: "The girl under the black umbrella", again thnx, and well, I think we might indeed have some things in common if you felt like you where her. "Gray Window", well, actually no. At least to me its not a person, but its good that its different for some people, I guess in a way the window IS a person, because in the poem he/she's like my one and only friend so... I dont really know. "Liar", well, thanks I'm glad you really liked it a lot. And "The perfect dark land"... well -cries of emotion- thanks, I'm glad you liked it that much, that one's kind of my favourite too, (in the ones written in the page o 'course), that one and "The girl under the black umbrella", I just really visualize the girl in my mind and I'm in love with her. Erm, well THANKS again, and you dont know how good you made me feel when you said you could read it a thousand times and never get tired. Well take care and please dont kill yourself... you are my only fan, lol.

well, I'm not going to kill myself. I'm only going to keep reading your poems. keep it up. they are GREAT. read my new one?

You have a new one...? Of course, just submit it and I will.

I might write another tomorrow if I'm in the right mood. when are you going to write another?

I wrote one not so long ago.. was kinda pissed off.. read it if you like. it's not very good though. I just had to get stuff out

Thanks for the comments I like your writing too Did you get a chance to see mine?

I like your style to... you write really good...

-TOOL is friggin awsome

oh, not yet. I'll go check. thanks for the comment