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Hi! Welcome to devart! Are you going to post art soon?
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"It's winter for crying out loud! Winter should act like winter!" - Ogiue, Genshiken
"They'd map out roads through Hell with their crackpot theories!" - Grendel, by John Gardner
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"It's winter for crying out loud! Winter should act like winter!" - Ogiue, Genshiken
"They'd map out roads through Hell with their crackpot theories!" - Grendel, by John Gardner
Welcome to Deviant Art! Your Poetry is Amazing!
im devwatching you.
im devwatching you.
Hello there.
don't forget to visit Sam's page,
and heres mine,
Hope you have fun here. I love your stuff, put up as much as possible
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If you disagree with me, you are automatically wrong.
don't forget to visit Sam's page,
and heres mine,
Hope you have fun here. I love your stuff, put up as much as possible
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If you disagree with me, you are automatically wrong.
Soon...I hope. I have some poetry, but I gotta wait to get my scanner.
*blink blink* Are you a professional poet?! You're stuff is so good!
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"It's winter for crying out loud! Winter should act like winter!" - Ogiue, Genshiken
"They'd map out roads through Hell with their crackpot theories!" - Grendel, by John Gardner
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"It's winter for crying out loud! Winter should act like winter!" - Ogiue, Genshiken
"They'd map out roads through Hell with their crackpot theories!" - Grendel, by John Gardner
thanks for adding "Path" to your favorites.
Well, I'm definetly glad i took the time to view your material. you've got a lot of really good pieces, and even more straight, raw potential. keep it up, i'll be watching you.
Well, I'm definetly glad i took the time to view your material. you've got a lot of really good pieces, and even more straight, raw potential. keep it up, i'll be watching you.
Hey thanks for the favorite!
Comments and favorite always welccom hehe.
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If you disagree with me, you are automatically wrong.
Comments and favorite always welccom hehe.
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If you disagree with me, you are automatically wrong.
I am so sorry that I not much of a poetry critic. However, if you catch me sometime next month when my matters have calmed down a bit, I may be able to give it a better try.
I'm so pleased you enjoyed my more "whacked" images - Royalty, in particular, was a lucky find in my own nature photography that I almost missed. I end up about 80% happy with it, so your good report eases me somewhat, honestly.
Bless you so much.
I'm so pleased you enjoyed my more "whacked" images - Royalty, in particular, was a lucky find in my own nature photography that I almost missed. I end up about 80% happy with it, so your good report eases me somewhat, honestly.
Bless you so much.
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I've read through:
Broken Little Girl
A Search Through the Years
An Oddly Tale
I think the 3rd piece was the most interesting, and I'm glad to see you playing so much with sound, structure, allusion, and metaphor. You lose a bit in the imagery, which in the two other pieces is your strength, but the content and form in "An Oddly Tale" is inventive and shows growth.
The main thing I can recommend is to keep playing around with structure and with sound. Also play with the content more. By that I mean the imagery, metaphors, etc. Also, watch your punctuation. I see potential in your work, and I think that if you just keep writing and trying to growth within your writing, you'll be doing great.
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