WOOT!

Welcome!



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" It's a backwards universe, where up is down and boy bands play instruments."
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Chicks dig pale Scrawny guys.

*I* dig pale, scrawny guys. :-P

So do I! 'magine that!

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" It's a backwards universe, where up is down and boy bands play instruments."
-The Weekenders

Chicks dig pale Scrawny guys.

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come see my deviations!!!! D+D: Just a Game is a great one! Course you have already heard it in class last year!

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" It's a backwards universe, where up is down and boy bands play instruments."
-The Weekenders

Chicks dig pale Scrawny guys.

I read the three pieces you've posted thus far and the most important things I can tell you are 1) to show instead of tell, and 2) (which builds on one) use imagery to tell your story.
I also think you should read lots and lots of poetry (some on dA, but mostly real poetry in books). Try Blake, Ginsberg, Tristan Tsar (I hope I spelled that right); try Romanticism, Surrealism, dada, modern poetry, ancient lit. Soak it all in. The best way to become a better writer is to experience life, read what came before you & then strike your own path.



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do your part. love your mother.

Thanks for the fav on 'Kat Serie 04', !

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Thank you for the watch and all the favourites, Im glad you like my work

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"I Think My Mask of Sanity Is About To Slip." (Patrick Bateman from 'American Psycho'

Hey, thanks for the watch .

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thanks for adding me to your friends list.!

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Farewell dear friend! ~AVIAN~
"The end of happyness is pain, and in like a manner misery ends in unexpected happyness."

Thanks so much for your sweet comment. Lately my poetry has become a labor of love, so positive feedback is great.

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do your part. love your mother.