Comment on Steam Iron by Blueskye27
Hello Cindy
This poem is a perfect vignette. The second stanza expresses just the right degree of laconic regret.
Further enlargement belongs in the reader's mind.
There is another possibility that you might consider (for another occasion perhaps), and that is writing with the pronoun "she". This transposition could lead you to an alternative way of understanding this fleeting material?
This poem is a perfect vignette. The second stanza expresses just the right degree of laconic regret.
Further enlargement belongs in the reader's mind.
There is another possibility that you might consider (for another occasion perhaps), and that is writing with the pronoun "she". This transposition could lead you to an alternative way of understanding this fleeting material?
Thanks, Alec. I'm glad you like it. I rather like it this way myself.
I'm not so good with that third person; I need to work on it.
I'm not so good with that third person; I need to work on it.