Cookie-master's avatar
this one stodd out the most to me

i like the way u did the hair...i guess i suggest to make the contrast between the light and the dark less or something? 8*unsure of how to critique* it looks nice to me

id conside work on the eyes, specifically the iris
TubaQueen's avatar
Thank you for taking the time to look. You are right about the eyes, if I had done this on better paper I would go back try to fix it ^^;
Cookie-master's avatar
XD okay ur welcome