When it comes to believable Space Superiority Vehicles, while you may be tempted to base it to some extent on modern fighter aircraft design, you'll want to be careful about the use of features that resemble "Intakes". Since it is space, unless you are using the Intake resembling features as Rocket Pods or as the reversing component of a 2-directional Main-Thrusters feature (For slowing down rapidly or reversing to aid in zero-grav zero-drag environments), there is no need for them. In the event that they are rocket pods or a reversing thruster... you would want to space them further behind and below the cockpit to avoid temporary blindness from the resulting flash of light coming from so close and within the field of vision of the pilot.
That aside, I find the overall design aesthetically pleasing.