Comment on Goodnight Saigon -Part Five- by Waltz-With-Me

Ah, the other end. Basically I tried to get across that the Vietnam War affected many people, not just Lewis and Jennifer, so I had a man at the end talk about his comatose wife who had been a front-lines nurse and how she'd never wake up. But I didn't tie it in quite right and it just took away from the impact at the end. So until I go in for a major edit, I just took it out.

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