ALRadeck's avatar
It is as it is, it's my own interpretation of things, not what everyone else has told you. In here, everyone's able to get hurt just as everything else. Different planes of existance is the only difference. It's not going to be a conventional book on ghosts and so-forth. And nothing else yet happens besides her crashing, that's the end of this chapter and all you're supposed to know.
Arthas972's avatar
Yeah, I figured that. The way you described the chain breaking and proceeding events is hard to understand. The way it's described is... vague.
ALRadeck's avatar
Fixed it, hopefully it should flow better now. Thanks for the heads up.
Arthas972's avatar
I actually read through it a second time before you changed it and I figured out the parts that didn't make sense, but thanks for clarifying it. It's much better now.
ALRadeck's avatar
Alright, good. :)
ALRadeck's avatar
ah, well, i'll fix that then.