Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it so much!
I'm curious, which website did you first find this? I've shared it in a few other places, and I often lose track of where I post what. xD
I'm extremely glad to hear it's...manga-ish. I tried hard to make it as believable and manga-worthy as I could (though there's no way I could live up to Arakawa's genius, haha. I'm sure the way she wraps up her story will blow all my pathetic attempts out of the water).
I will definitely keep writing! I'm finishing part 2 as we speak...er, type...or whatever...pie... *is random*
I'm trying real hard to finish the next part before the final chapter of FMA is released, so wish me luck and stay tuned!
Thanks so much for the lovely comment!