Comment on Short Range Supply Carrier by Shantonian
I like the nose, it seems to have a lot of things going on, the lights in the cockpit/bridge area and the shape of it, the back has something going with the engine area, but it looks slightly cut out, you might want to add some more fuzziness towards the tips of the burner heads formed by the blinding light of the engine blast. the middle bit with all the containers seem dull, you have the cross bar shapes and red lights going but it seems to need more, something for the viewer to look at for longer than 2 seconds and think about, how will they open, move, or something, maybe that area could contain other equipment as well? anyway, just my point of view.
Thanx a lot for the constructive and detailed feedback! That kind is exactly what you hope for when you request critiques. 
I agree with you in all points. Some of them occurred because the screen lightness is slightly different on my wacom tablet than on other screens. I started to put this ship into CAD, hopefully I will have spare time enough to finish it soon and solving the issues you mentioned.
I agree with you in all points. Some of them occurred because the screen lightness is slightly different on my wacom tablet than on other screens. I started to put this ship into CAD, hopefully I will have spare time enough to finish it soon and solving the issues you mentioned.
It was an absolute pleasure, I always try to inspire people to give me actual critiques but it never happens, people always say the like it or its pretty or some poo but at the end of the day its useless if no one bothers to tell you what they don’t like. If you don’t mind, I have an artwork called Girl 2, I don’t know if you have taken a look at it, but I would appreciate it if you could give me some critiques on it. If you have time.