Comment on Tofauti Sawa- 1 by TheCynicalHound
Good for you for drawing what you love and not listening to people who whine about how they want you to make your old canine comics etc.
I love the color scheme you have chosen for this chapter and the layered affect the first panel has. Simple but sets the mood.
I think your vultures are pretty damn awesome lol.
My only suggestion is that in the bottom panel I understand what you are going for with the breaking up of the box... but the line across the vulture's next is visually obstructive, and I personally find it distracting. I believe the page would be much stronger if it was removed
Keep up the good work, I'm off to read more.
I love the color scheme you have chosen for this chapter and the layered affect the first panel has. Simple but sets the mood.
I think your vultures are pretty damn awesome lol.
My only suggestion is that in the bottom panel I understand what you are going for with the breaking up of the box... but the line across the vulture's next is visually obstructive, and I personally find it distracting. I believe the page would be much stronger if it was removed
Keep up the good work, I'm off to read more.