Comment on The Pet Shop: A TF Story by scarmask99
Well done! The story has detail, suspense, emotional intensity, characters with personalities, and other cool stuff. The epilogue is indeed poetic. It could be seen as a reminder to help your friends. Oh, and the bad guy didn't necessarily win. If Cait stays brave and determined, she just might find a way to change Kira back.
Wow! >_> nobody has really done such a....nice critique (or any for that matter) on my story. I wrote this as....pretty much my first piece. I recommend my new story "The Greatest Hero!"
i'd like to know what you think of it!
i'd like to know what you think of it!