ToseiSeki's avatar
Then certainly rework the beam, and adjust the shadow of the beam as well. They feel very natural especially if you consider the perspective of the print. You might want to add a few vanishing point and projection line to make sure the beam is tilting in the right angle. You can remove the black line after coloring the beam. That would make it less crisp and shift the focus back to Poplar-chan.

Ya, I expect indepth criticism on my stuff from you guys too. Plz criticize more!!