Comment on Good clean fun by falingard
First of all I have to say that Nitrine is one of my favs and that I love this pinup of her 
As for a critique:
The overall layout and design of the pinup is done very well. It is very apparent that much time and care went into the suds of the bubble bath. A little bit more drippage & sheen on Nitrine's hair would give her hair a more wet look to it. That is all that I could find. The message of this piece speaks loud and clear as to what and where the character is and doing (well we can't really say that Nitrine is in HER apartment taking a bath... she could by all means be at her boyfriends or her new halfling's place taking a bath... lol.)
As for a critique:
The overall layout and design of the pinup is done very well. It is very apparent that much time and care went into the suds of the bubble bath. A little bit more drippage & sheen on Nitrine's hair would give her hair a more wet look to it. That is all that I could find. The message of this piece speaks loud and clear as to what and where the character is and doing (well we can't really say that Nitrine is in HER apartment taking a bath... she could by all means be at her boyfriends or her new halfling's place taking a bath... lol.)