Comment on Internal Bleeding by cuttheredwire

Too simple? Maybe. I'll have to think about it. I'm ope to constructive critisism. =^.~=

The rhymes are a mix of very careful crafting and moments of inspiration in my poems. Meter often comes first. I test my poems out loud to test if it comes together ok... don't know if anyone else does that. ^.^;

I read it and commented. They seemed to have a lot in common with this and another poem of mine (though I didn't state that clearly). I had to take a look when you siad it had the same title. >;}