Comment on Please Understand by Angels-Antidote
Okay. I love this, but I noticed a few things that threw me off: (my English teacher has imprinted revising and editing in my brain. Sorry 
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1. Shadowhunters don't use rings in shadowhunter weddings. They use marks. I'm not sure if you knew this, but I thought you might want to know.
2. There were a few minor typos
I really love this piece. MORE PLEASE!!!!!
) 1. Shadowhunters don't use rings in shadowhunter weddings. They use marks. I'm not sure if you knew this, but I thought you might want to know.
2. There were a few minor typos
I really love this piece. MORE PLEASE!!!!!
I would like to fix my errors because I have also noticed them. I have a terrible time with my typos.
Darn it! I forgot that they use marks. I'm really sad I forgot. Thanks for pointing it out (and thanks in general!)!!
I'll see what else I can come up with
Darn it! I forgot that they use marks. I'm really sad I forgot. Thanks for pointing it out (and thanks in general!)!!
I'll see what else I can come up with
don't change it though! It's too perfectly amazing to change!
Oh xD alright