Moonbeams's avatar
Wonderfully rhythmic piece, and full of titillating imagery as well. I particularly liked the use of internal rhyme. It was the icing on the already deliciously layered cake for me. I think the ending works well; it's fitting.
cwedmart's avatar
Thank you. The internal rhyme was almost accidental. What I mean is, I didn't begin writing this intending to do internal rhyme. It just felt right.

Your comment is wonderful and has totally uplifted me. I humbly appreciate your time and attention!