Comment on My Naruto Oc Love Kukoroshi by Lolalilacs

very pretty! i like her hair and her pose. very fenemine. i cant spell. a few pointers, one try and make her toes more definite. perhaps instead of just the tips, draw the line in a bit deeper, to avoid the playdoh blobby look. her black stripe shoulder thing is pretty and i understand it is your design for a outfit but think as if you were the ninja, wouldnt it restrict your movement, something important to a ninja? i apologize if this is any way offends you but those are the things that irk me the most. as well, she seems a bit pale. her shading on her arms, though well placed seem much to dark for her fair skin tone. lighten that up, it looks to strong and harsh, try using a lighter palette, just take a sample of her main skin colour and adjust it untill it is just a bit darker. it would make the shadows more realistic, as they play better, and melt into the skin maker it more lifelike. im rambling arent i? well thats all, but overall a nice picture