Thank you for the note!
And I must confess that, while not every page is as much fun to produce as some, the "Demon's Due" storyline is overall a thoroughly enjoyable project, reinforced by the enjoyment of the folks here on DA who comment like you've done here.
There are many mistakes (most of them artistically) and a few plot-holes that commenters help me catch, too, which is quite useful. I hope, when the story is at long last all finished, that most everyone will be able to look back on it all and feel a sense of having taken an enjoyable little journey.
Thanks again! I'm super-glad you're enjoying it.