I don't think you need to stop "playing"! Your drawings are very cute. It's just the fact that Azula speaks articulately and properly, and swearing doesn't fit her.
I feel very embarrassed with my poor english... I have some plot in mind but I've no idea how to write them down porperly... really wish someone could help with my script/writing.
lots... but I'm not going to write stories anyway, I'm a sucks at writting in any laugeage. But I do want to draw some small piece manga or comic. but the dialogue writting is a big problem.