Comment on Christmas-time by bbd127
Yup, this really is sublime; not to mention some of the best and most tightly structured metre I've read in a long time. Speaking as a picky syllable-counter, it wams my heart.
Hahah... being picky about syllable counts is my job. If nothing else I can always have a solid meter, right? Thanks!
Absolutely! And I must have been out of it when I said it 'wam'ed my heart. Make that 'warm', or possibly 'wham.' By the way, I scrolled down and saw the stuff about the 'now' and wanted to say I actually really thought it worked; quite apart from anything else, it gave it that whole sing-song saga effect.