Lol. At the very least, he'll conceal the worst features of the underworld. I think, considering his history, he would rather her eventually come around so that someone would choose him, instead of forcing her. However, he is more than willing to force her if she doesn't choose him.
I totally understand the not showing anyone their raw writings. It is so scary. More than terrifying. There it is, ink and paper, your inner most thoughts, desires, hopes, wishes and fears. SHARING THEM? It's absolutely crazy. But, Idk. I've gotten better at it. My writing classes have helped me overcome that fear. First it started with very impersonal stuff, then to slightly personal stuff, and now I am less afraid to share. I've had a really good writing professor. She has, more or less, forced me to write about personal experiences and it really has helped.
Then I started posting this stuff onto dA and started a fan fic. It's still scary, but I've mostly received positive feedback. And the negative feedback I've gotten, mostly has to do with taste issues. I definitely check my page every two seconds when I post something new, desperate for any feedback--negative or positive.
The super nice thing about dA is that by posting it on dA it is immediately copyrighted. It's evidence, in case anyone tries to steal your stuff. However, the downside to posting stories that have the potential to be posted means that by letting people read it they might not want to buy it because they've read it. BUT it builds a fan base.