ebony-chan's avatar
I like the one on the right better =) It has somewhat of a sin city feel to you. =)
Dualmask's avatar
Thanks! I like the one on the right too, except it doesn't give a clear idea as to how long the character's hair is. If not for the other images to reference it, the hair would probably look strange to first-time viewers.
ebony-chan's avatar
maybe you could outline the hair just a little more to show the flow and length?
Dualmask's avatar
I gave your idea a try. Just updated it...how about now?
ebony-chan's avatar
nice now you can see the length and flow of her hair. great job man. =)