Comment on Il Anor I - Genesis by jazblack009
Wow, those last few lines were great! Poems that are able to bring you full circle at the end always tend to be more memorable, since they bring you back to the beginning of what you might otherwise forget. I know you must have spent a long time getting the rhying down so well, so I must commend you! I believe that there is not enough rhyming poetry these days, since "freestyle" caters to the lazy side of wannabe poets. I love rhyming poetry the most =3 Something very amazing about this was the line where you are commanded to picture a "perfect place". For me, a vision of green forest at the base of mountins popped up instantly. But the best part was not me being able to imagine a perfect place, but the way that you were able to know, if you will, what my perfect place was, that it would be different from anyone else's.
If you continue with your work like this, I know you are going to get very far in the literary world! Keep it up, we are waiting for a good poet~
If you continue with your work like this, I know you are going to get very far in the literary world! Keep it up, we are waiting for a good poet~
It's very hard to reply to a comment that flatters you like that.
I've always had that belief with perfection, that a universal perfection is a lie. There is much more to come with this poem i'm not finishing it with a stupid ending, and i'm no where near that anyway, the rhyming does take a while but its worth it to see a finished product.
I'd love for you to stick around and see the story through, i don't believe there is enough rhyming poetry around either so i'm trying to add to DA in that regard.
thankyou so much for the encouragement, who knows what the future brings.
I've always had that belief with perfection, that a universal perfection is a lie. There is much more to come with this poem i'm not finishing it with a stupid ending, and i'm no where near that anyway, the rhyming does take a while but its worth it to see a finished product.
I'd love for you to stick around and see the story through, i don't believe there is enough rhyming poetry around either so i'm trying to add to DA in that regard.
thankyou so much for the encouragement, who knows what the future brings.
Don't worry, it is not so much flattery if the person sending it is truly sincere! I will certainly be looking forward to your next installment =3