It's going to look like a critique, but that's because I think the critique is well organized and I am able to get my thoughts out using each of the sections.
Vision:
I think you've done a wonderful job sharing you and your friend's experience with Harry Potter. I especially like the way each character seems to be letting me in on a secret of some sort.
Have you ever thought of taking your creations and drawings each one in a separate piece? Maybe to highlight the personalities and make them a bit bigger so all that detail you've put in is a bit more visible.
Originality:
All the clothing is do detailed. You really spent some time giving each character a defined figure and unique clothing to set them apart from others. The body language is so amazing in this piece, really showing off your friend's creation and your understanding of the character Jo made, while at the same time bringing and entirely fresh view to them.
Technique:
Each character is well proportioned with clear lines and each facial expression is visible, despite the small size of the drawing. Each character blends well with the world, even some of your friends original ones. I couldn't tell, at first, which ones are fanon because they all fit together so seamlessly.
Impact:
Somehow, each image manages to stick separately into my head. Each character gives off his or her own personality and engages me in different ways. I really get a sense of how you lived the books and how you see the characters.
Vision:
I think you've done a wonderful job sharing you and your friend's experience with Harry Potter. I especially like the way each character seems to be letting me in on a secret of some sort.
Have you ever thought of taking your creations and drawings each one in a separate piece? Maybe to highlight the personalities and make them a bit bigger so all that detail you've put in is a bit more visible.
Originality:
All the clothing is do detailed. You really spent some time giving each character a defined figure and unique clothing to set them apart from others. The body language is so amazing in this piece, really showing off your friend's creation and your understanding of the character Jo made, while at the same time bringing and entirely fresh view to them.
Technique:
Each character is well proportioned with clear lines and each facial expression is visible, despite the small size of the drawing. Each character blends well with the world, even some of your friends original ones. I couldn't tell, at first, which ones are fanon because they all fit together so seamlessly.
Impact:
Somehow, each image manages to stick separately into my head. Each character gives off his or her own personality and engages me in different ways. I really get a sense of how you lived the books and how you see the characters.