perverse-idyll's avatar
This is beautiful. An odd word for such a painful scene, but the way you've drawn Snape's body is mesmerizing. The sharpness of his face, the agony in it, is hard to look away from. There's so much intensity here. I also love how you've imagined Harry, his concentration and maturity. And the spill of Snape's hair, the way he claws at the sheet, the extraordinary arch of his ribs -- poor Severus. So much suffering and yet so gorgeous. The story implied by this scene is extremely private and clenched tight with emotion. And I like how perfectly you've caught the difference in ages, without making Snape too old or Harry too young.

Marvelous work. I've had this open in a tab all day so I could look at it over and over again.
S-U-U-N's avatar
Awww.. Thankings to you for such kind words! You have provided to me a smile till the morning)))