Sylversmyth's avatar
Haha well, I do appreciate the responsiveness to the comments, but you don't have to feel obligated to make changes!  The fact that this was the only real drawback to your story so far is a HUGE testament to your skills as a writer!

However, from my own experiences I can definitely understand the feeling that you 'need' to make improvements to what you've already written (I tend to get so caught up in 'editing' that it takes me a while to get back into 'writing')
cas42's avatar
Must... make... changes... must... have... perfection!!!

(I have the same problem)

 But all the comedy aside... It is a great suggestion. I'm going to use it... So there :P 

-Cas