Comment on A magic carnival - Part 6 by hippo2
It's pleasant to see how wise and nice Anne-Laure is. I also like how you dressed her up for this occasion.
Did you imagine her with a different personality? Please tell me.
I imagined her as an immature, insecure woman who was often complaining at things. But despite this, good-natured and romantic.
I saw her as a romantic too. Basically good-natured fits well, though I can imagine that she is mischivous from time to time. So, giving her the chance to turn into a fairy suits her quite well. I imagine her to use her fairy costume to flee from her stressed world from time to time. A bit like a little girl playing princess.
Maybe she's a bit too wise in my story from how you imagined her. I'll see if I can change a few words slightly to make her fit a bit more to your ideas.
Maybe she's a bit too wise in my story from how you imagined her. I'll see if I can change a few words slightly to make her fit a bit more to your ideas.
I see Anne-Laure as being quite smart, but she has trouble using her intelligence most of the time because she has a lot of bad habits: her emotions often are stronger than her logic.
She gives good advice but has trouble to practice what she preaches.
Yes, she is mischievous from time to time, and she enjoys disguises too in a childish way. You hit the notch here.
She gives good advice but has trouble to practice what she preaches.
Yes, she is mischievous from time to time, and she enjoys disguises too in a childish way. You hit the notch here.