Well, maybe I'm not smart enough or I misunderstood some really basic concepts, so please let me make this clear:
1) Naruto got hit by a jutsu that feeds off whenever he USES chakra (never mind molding chakra or natural way his body creates chakra, just when he uses it on a technique).
2) That plant also feeds off Kyuubi's chakra, but only when he pushes it into Naruto.
3) The plant has 5 stages and right now is in stage 3, plus being irremovable, by changing Naruto's body cells, muscles, tissue and bones.
Sure, that jutsu sounds powerful - for a normal ninja. But we're talking about Naruto here, two years after the war. His chakra reserves were Jounin-like during his Genin time already and when combined with Kyuubi, it was on par with the deadliest and most powerful ninjas in the whole world. Why didn't he use all of that chakra to overfeed the plant or simply burn it away from his body? Sure, it would hurt like hell, but his healing factor preserved him from direct stabs all over his body including heart. Or he could ask Hinata, Neji or any Byakugan user for help. Their ability to see chakra and cut through it like butter, including tenketsu and chakra circulatory system, could sever that plant from Naruto's body or at least damage it over time to make it drop off. Why didn't Sasuke or Sakura think of that?
Even if that would be impossible, Naruto could still do one more thing, exactly what he did against Pein's Preta Path - his senjutsu. Natural energy is impossible to control by anyone without master or grandmaster chakra control (something I doubt a mere jutsu could have) and would turn that plant into a stone in a matter of seconds. I guess that wouldn't be too comfortable either, but it would definitely stop it and allowed for its removal safely. I know Naruto is baka here, even bigger than in the manga, but at least Sakura or Hinata could think of that (both of them saw his fight against Pein).
To move a little bit from Naruto, I didn't completely catch Sasuke's fight before, but did he really got caught up in genjutsu? Sasuke, on par with Naruto, with Sharingan that is able to break through most (any) genjutsu? Did he lost his touch in the last two years or did he do it deliberately to test his opponent? If it's the latter, then it severely backfired.
I'm not trying to make this doujin look bad, I just found it today and enjoyed most of its parts (some of them more or less realistic than others), but in the matter of powers, it looks mostly like Naruto is being quite a pussy here and Sasuke, despite all of his cool look, didn't fare any better. Ironically, the strongest of Konoha's shinobi so far are Sai, Karin and Sakura. I like them strong and dependable, but should we switch Naruto for a doll, it wouldn't change any impact he had on the story so far.
1) Naruto got hit by a jutsu that feeds off whenever he USES chakra (never mind molding chakra or natural way his body creates chakra, just when he uses it on a technique).
2) That plant also feeds off Kyuubi's chakra, but only when he pushes it into Naruto.
3) The plant has 5 stages and right now is in stage 3, plus being irremovable, by changing Naruto's body cells, muscles, tissue and bones.
Sure, that jutsu sounds powerful - for a normal ninja. But we're talking about Naruto here, two years after the war. His chakra reserves were Jounin-like during his Genin time already and when combined with Kyuubi, it was on par with the deadliest and most powerful ninjas in the whole world. Why didn't he use all of that chakra to overfeed the plant or simply burn it away from his body? Sure, it would hurt like hell, but his healing factor preserved him from direct stabs all over his body including heart. Or he could ask Hinata, Neji or any Byakugan user for help. Their ability to see chakra and cut through it like butter, including tenketsu and chakra circulatory system, could sever that plant from Naruto's body or at least damage it over time to make it drop off. Why didn't Sasuke or Sakura think of that?
Even if that would be impossible, Naruto could still do one more thing, exactly what he did against Pein's Preta Path - his senjutsu. Natural energy is impossible to control by anyone without master or grandmaster chakra control (something I doubt a mere jutsu could have) and would turn that plant into a stone in a matter of seconds. I guess that wouldn't be too comfortable either, but it would definitely stop it and allowed for its removal safely. I know Naruto is baka here, even bigger than in the manga, but at least Sakura or Hinata could think of that (both of them saw his fight against Pein).
To move a little bit from Naruto, I didn't completely catch Sasuke's fight before, but did he really got caught up in genjutsu? Sasuke, on par with Naruto, with Sharingan that is able to break through most (any) genjutsu? Did he lost his touch in the last two years or did he do it deliberately to test his opponent? If it's the latter, then it severely backfired.
I'm not trying to make this doujin look bad, I just found it today and enjoyed most of its parts (some of them more or less realistic than others), but in the matter of powers, it looks mostly like Naruto is being quite a pussy here and Sasuke, despite all of his cool look, didn't fare any better. Ironically, the strongest of Konoha's shinobi so far are Sai, Karin and Sakura. I like them strong and dependable, but should we switch Naruto for a doll, it wouldn't change any impact he had on the story so far.
It's fine, it's fine. I don't mind what you wrote. It's true. I actually wanted to see what Naruto would do in a weak situation, since he can get out of most of everything for that matter. He's quite OP, and....it's kinda hard to write a story which a character can get out of the situation with no problem. I don't mean to make Naruto pathetic. Not at all. I actually want to see him struggle a bit before he finds a way out of it. It won't be much of a story if Naruto already got out. I was mostly curious on what a guy would do when he's switch gender role that isn't always about Ecchi (just insight of what a girl has to deal with) It's just for fun thing to do. Forgive me if the jutsu are very off. I know it isn't all what the jutsu is in the real comic. I mean, Naruto just lost his kyuubi and needed his father's kyuubi one. I simply...don't want to rewrite my fan comic. TT.TT
Another thing, I couldn't catch up with Kishimoto anymore. I decided, in the end, this fan comic is just for guilty pleasure now. ( Even the jutsu (etc) out of place and the characters are out of whack, the drawing is not good) X.x I do apologies some parts of my fan comic was hard to swallow and that it made Naruto look bad. *bows* It's my first try making a fan comic, so my writing is to blame for the lack of the character's realism. Thanks for your input, thoughts, I'll try to make the characters a bit more real, but I don't think I can make the jutsu better. Thanks for enjoying some parts of my fancomic.
Another thing, I couldn't catch up with Kishimoto anymore. I decided, in the end, this fan comic is just for guilty pleasure now. ( Even the jutsu (etc) out of place and the characters are out of whack, the drawing is not good) X.x I do apologies some parts of my fan comic was hard to swallow and that it made Naruto look bad. *bows* It's my first try making a fan comic, so my writing is to blame for the lack of the character's realism. Thanks for your input, thoughts, I'll try to make the characters a bit more real, but I don't think I can make the jutsu better. Thanks for enjoying some parts of my fancomic.
I completely understand about Kishimoto. His late ideas are... well, I find them so bad that I'm keeping tabs on manga just for the pure reason of finding out how it's going to end. I don't blame just him, but also his managers/anime productors etc. who, I think, forced him to keep writing to make more money out of the series.
I'm sorry if I sounded too offensive. I know that the main focus of your story was for fun / turning Naruto into a real girl. That was done very nicely and Naruto's rather simple mind made hell of it both for him and for his friends, something that was quite refreshing to see. I'm just a little bit sensitive when Naruto is made weak so late in the series. He was weak at the start, kept being weak through most of the series and when he finally became a bit better, his enemies did so tenfold (hooray for Kishimoto!). If we put aside some very slight things, I think that he handled it... erm... considering how much he needed Sasuke and Sakura's help, I think he's just survived it so far.
I like your story back in the terms of finding and explaining love (Kakashi finally showed some brain, success!), although it spells an end of Naruto and Hinata together, seeing that Hinata loves Naruto, but I don't exactly see Naruto loving her back (he's still looking mostly at Sakura and always runs with any problem to Sasuke first, not even one perverted thought about Hinata so far
), but I wish them all to find someone nice to love back. I'll be waiting for a next chapter from you. 
I'm sorry if I sounded too offensive. I know that the main focus of your story was for fun / turning Naruto into a real girl. That was done very nicely and Naruto's rather simple mind made hell of it both for him and for his friends, something that was quite refreshing to see. I'm just a little bit sensitive when Naruto is made weak so late in the series. He was weak at the start, kept being weak through most of the series and when he finally became a bit better, his enemies did so tenfold (hooray for Kishimoto!). If we put aside some very slight things, I think that he handled it... erm... considering how much he needed Sasuke and Sakura's help, I think he's just survived it so far.
I like your story back in the terms of finding and explaining love (Kakashi finally showed some brain, success!), although it spells an end of Naruto and Hinata together, seeing that Hinata loves Naruto, but I don't exactly see Naruto loving her back (he's still looking mostly at Sakura and always runs with any problem to Sasuke first, not even one perverted thought about Hinata so far
), but I wish them all to find someone nice to love back. I'll be waiting for a next chapter from you. It is kinda sad, I'm sure if Kishimoto just had a couple months off to rethink his story parts. I am sure he would've come up with something better. *nod nod* Yes, I totally agree the amount of stress they place on him. I can't imagine what he has to go through in order to make everyone happy. Which isn't good, because he needs to be happy with it as well.
Not at all. I knew I was doing the justus wrong, but I didn't realize how very wrong I was doing them. It is a good insight. So, you don't have to apologies. I need to know these things, how else will I learn if I am repeating the same thing! :smile: Aww, thank you. In chapter 5 Naruto is going to be training. I always loved how Lee is amazingly strong even though he doesn't need Jutsu, that's sorta what I want Naruto to be. That he doesn't have to relie on Jutsu in order to make him strong. Since he can think of ways to over power the enemy. That's what I want to aim for. It'll come through in later chapters. =^.^=
Well, that's up to you guys. I am only offering the relationship to everyone. Like different kinds of chocolates. I wanted my readers to look at all the coupling and learn to respect each others fandom. (kinda way. I don't know if it's working.) It's the chocolates you guys have to taste, once you guys pick the chocolate you like. I'll give you the chocolate you guys need. With Naruto, I have been follow his personally as best as I can in the normal manga. He's kinda weird with Hinata, but that gives Hinata a challenge on how to do things. But like I said, I can change the story in the end of this comic to whoevers liking. =^.^= It isn't set in stone yet.*hugs* Thank you for enjoying the story and input!~
Not at all. I knew I was doing the justus wrong, but I didn't realize how very wrong I was doing them. It is a good insight. So, you don't have to apologies. I need to know these things, how else will I learn if I am repeating the same thing! :smile: Aww, thank you. In chapter 5 Naruto is going to be training. I always loved how Lee is amazingly strong even though he doesn't need Jutsu, that's sorta what I want Naruto to be. That he doesn't have to relie on Jutsu in order to make him strong. Since he can think of ways to over power the enemy. That's what I want to aim for. It'll come through in later chapters. =^.^=
Well, that's up to you guys. I am only offering the relationship to everyone. Like different kinds of chocolates. I wanted my readers to look at all the coupling and learn to respect each others fandom. (kinda way. I don't know if it's working.) It's the chocolates you guys have to taste, once you guys pick the chocolate you like. I'll give you the chocolate you guys need. With Naruto, I have been follow his personally as best as I can in the normal manga. He's kinda weird with Hinata, but that gives Hinata a challenge on how to do things. But like I said, I can change the story in the end of this comic to whoevers liking. =^.^= It isn't set in stone yet.*hugs* Thank you for enjoying the story and input!~