I will ponder and examine that section you pointed out. It could end up being altered and enhanced, if not in now, in the third draft.
As for Captain Wasitpan, I am not finished with him. It may be as simple as a reference to his fate in the novels themselves or I may create another Prologue with him in it. I could even include him in one of the several short stories I hope to write. Either way, I have decided from the start that he will be visited again.