Hahaha hey, I had a page limit and I filled it up. I feel like it's a bit lacking, as well, but I didn't want to spill over and lose points, you know?
I would like to point out that Katie isn't accidentally outed; her brother acknowledges during their conversation that he's known for a while about her sexual orientation, he's just never been a witness to it. I know that LGBT stories are pretty popular in this day and age, with the whole Gay Rights movement going on, but for me it's just the idea of slipping into a different skin. I'm a straight Pagan; Katie's an Irish-Catholic lesbian. Very big difference there, and something that I enjoyed trying to understand.
Katie and her family have some fabulous issues; the first story I wrote that was a sort of first draft of this one, but was set much later on, addressed a lot of them, but it was taking too much on at once. I might like to try and stretch her and her family into something more lengthy, but it would take quite a bit of time and planning, I suppose.
Your critique, once again, is welcomed and delightful.