Hmmm.. now for this one...
I liked how you used mumbling a lot for Matthew... since that's what he does best ^^'' I think you captured his shyness perfectly.. and the jacket cuddling is just oh so cute!
now you made me feel a bit lonesome (i want a bf for the cold season)... but lol! It's sooo cute! Good job, imouto-chan!!
The two stories you wrote are just too cute!!