Thanks a lot for the critique! I can't say this enough times - it really REALLY helps when someone else points out what feels wrong from their perspective.
Very good points. I'm still working on something that works for the bottom of the roof. I'd rather not add more geometry, so I'm experimenting. I'll post some new renders soon. I also agree about the wood... absolutely not happy with that. Working on it.
Again, thanks a lot! I appreciate the feedback. Please don't stop