Comment on Commission: In The Rain (edit) by Catching-Smoke
This is seriously an amazing piece! I love it 
The only thing I'd tweak with the rain, is that one drop falling right below Hermione's hair. It's a little two bright and looks like it's in the foreground when you want it to be in the background (this should be easy enough to fix in photoshop even, by just fading it out a bit). Other than that, I like the gouache you added to the rain. It gives it a more watery look than the first one you uploaded
The only thing I'd tweak with the rain, is that one drop falling right below Hermione's hair. It's a little two bright and looks like it's in the foreground when you want it to be in the background (this should be easy enough to fix in photoshop even, by just fading it out a bit). Other than that, I like the gouache you added to the rain. It gives it a more watery look than the first one you uploaded
Thanks, yeh, it's a little slap-dash I realise but you are right with that particular white streak. Tbh my scanner has completely changed the colours of the piece, the white bits aren't as glaringly obvious in the actual piece... anyway. I digress.
Haha, no worries. My scanner has also been doing the same thing lately, and I understand that everything always looks better in person (because it does---scanners and photographs just don't do art justice a lot of the time).